3 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo #10: A or The

  1. I read the preview in my ‘Reader’ which quoted the first two lines, and I immediately thought the next line was going to be “they’re either gonna thaw out or freeze” from Joni Mitchel’s ‘Hejira’ (…’cept they were siting on a rock now I think on it)

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    • Thank you, Richard. I do like it when a short poem like this ‘comes together.’ The pieces ‘snick’ into place…although I still harbor doubts about which of the 12 or so versions of it is really the best……

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