NaPoWriMo, 2016, Day 6–When we came out



When we came out

When we came out from the city
there was nothing left of the town.

When we came out of the town
there was nothing left of the farm.

When we came out of the farm
there was nothing left of the forest

and

when we came out of the forest
there was 

nothing left.







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2 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo, 2016, Day 6–When we came out

  1. I really like this, the journey from the packed city to the open land. There’s many ways to read this.

    I wonder how it would work in reverse : from nothing to the city (and still nothing left?)

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