(a continuation of sorts of this poem, in a strange sort of a way...)
what are these things that we go to and get away from,
these masses of matter that we shun, shy away from
and then are drawn inevitably back towards—
or if not inevitably then more often than not
more strongly towards than away from so that
we are always having this going—
this coming and going, this to-ing and fro-ing—
these lines and circles in the woods where
even chaos is a kind of order, a kinder order
than we are used to, than we deserve,
a kind of overlay on these things that
defy this definition, all these definitions
since nature abhors lines and circles as much
as vacuums and yet of what is this universe
mostly made except the stuff of which it
isn’t?
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I read, I nodded, I smiled.
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Great work. The pace is brilliant—relentless, breathless, and yet somehow measured.
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Thanks David–you are too kind.
I did very little to this one. I was thinking of the other poem
and forests, and being lost
and it rather just poured out.
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Philosophy woven as poetry. You aced this one. 🙂
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Thank you Alice–I struggle with keeping my poems from getting too cerebral. I want a visceral quality. But this is often what comes out.
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I think it worked well. 🙂
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I can’t even pick a favorite line. Holy wow.
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Holy Wow! (that’s a new one on me)
Thanks!
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