(for Alice and Belinda....finally)
The bread becomes the baker
The baker does not exist
until bread-making begins.
Fingers are ropes. Hands,
lumps of mute flesh until
they touch the flour, until
they form the loaves, until
they roll the dough around
and around, turning the planet.
The sun does not rise until
the oven’s fire rubs the last
of the rest from the eyes
of the yeast and wakes it fully
from its bed within the warmth,
until the nascent crumb
stretches, yawns and grows
upon the crest of the day
when the baker becomes the bread
and again ceases to exist.
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This poem really rocks! Good work. This is very much like my process of bread making which is very much like my process of existence. I’m glad to see you writing poetry (in your spare time).
All the best.
((HUGS)) all round for you and your family.
Alice
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Thanks, Alice! Glad to be back in the saddle, even if it’s only for a ride around the paddock.
{{hugs}} back atcha’all.
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Get in that saddle every chance you get. I like what you have to say. 🙂
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I reckon I will at that, ma’am. I reckon I will.
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I like it when you talk all cowboy to me, partner. 😉
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Very insightful!
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Thank you for your kind words, Kinshuk.
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There’s something Rumi-esque about this piece, evocative and wise
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Wow, “Rumi-esque”? I am flattered, sir. thank you!
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stretches, yawns and grows
upon the crest of the day…my favorite lines. Well done, as usual. Enjoyed this thoughtful piece very much as the sun was rising and I thought about my day ahead.
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So this is a Dawn poem then. Good.
Thanks Aud–glad to see you, even if you are now Fettered?
😉
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oh, how delicious!
‘the oven’s fire rubs the last / / of the rest from the eyes / of the yeast’ = wow! and the whole also
and a great rhythm, the feeling of the kneading in it. and I loved how the night came full circle with the baker. I had to read it out loud to my husband, who readily agreed when I said, ‘Is that not beautiful?’
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Thank you so much Belinda–I think that’s my favorite line as well, but I’m a big fan of consonance and alliteration, so go figure.
I am particularly touched that you “had to read it out loud”–honored, indeed.
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“they roll the dough around
and around, turning the planet.”
Favorite line 🙂 This is truly inspired.
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Thanks so much, Natalie–
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And then… the ordinary became the extraordinary! For me (and may be for of us here), is this baker any different from the Maker?…. loved the idea.. thanks for sharing your thoughts! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words, madhu!
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in order to become, we first must do. what we do is what we become, that which gives us our identity. thus you are a poet and philosopher because that is what you do,
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Thanks so much. You give me too much credit, I think, but I thank you. My apologies for my tardy response. Life took me away from here for far too long. I am doing what I can to change that now.
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