(Susan challenged me to write a poem about hummus back in....umm...April, I think.
I get around to things eventually...)
Hum(m)us
Hearth of soil and soul of
stone, gather us
to your bosom. Hum us
like warmth into
winter’s close conjuring.
Hum us into
the bellies of our love.
Heirlooms live in
ancient ovens leavened
with our tailings,
leavings telling of our
ordinary
meals, the most sacred shared
by us, alone.
Pulses from one
to the one that sprang from
her very soil
(earth murmurs), the maker
passes on the
notes of a melody
for the making.
Six simple gifts, the land's
material,
ascend in scales, soft sound
offerings of
humble place; ordinals
older than words;
sounds fat and round and full
of life. "Fully
formed and transformed by the
mouth’s own making,
the soil's song sings itself
in tongues' silence,"
mumbles humus, a tune
down in its roots.
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I found this very comforting. Thank you.
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Call it a pagan comfort hymn, then…
Thank you, Julia.
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John, this is awesome. It reads like a pagan saying grace. LOVE it.
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Thank you Susan!
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Beautiful. I’m happiest with hum(m)us under my fingernails. My response poem:
dig deep and deeper
hum(m)us under fingernails
soft garbanzo beans
;-))
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I like the way you think Alice…and the way you write…which is really what this is all about.
hum us into love
with what we give to others
and what we receive
😉
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Thanks so much for your kind words. You are exactly right. This is about thinking and reading and writing.
music of the spheres
begins deep inside the heart
we dance together
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spherical songsters
speak across oceans and air–
the distances shrink
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the distances shrink
heart calls to heart through thin air
fingers tap the keys
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You should be glad she didn’t challenge you to write about taboli-I can’t even spell it.>KB
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Ah…tabouleh/tabouli/tabbouleh? Yes, that has a lot more ingredients…and many more ways to spell it!
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Nice one, a good rolling poem.
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Thank you Bruce. I like that–“rolling” I was wondering what to call this form…there it is.
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