Are your words still with you? Did you
carry your stories deep into
the night and leave them like luggage
on a railway platform, an age
and more down silver tracks, with just
the wind, the stars, and leaves like dust
blowing and hissing in the dark?
This silence leaves a fading mark.
The thing that took you left your face
in bodies unknown to you, lace
filaments tracing what the eyes
of others cannot see: the ties
that generation takes away;
the look in eyes that cannot stay.
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I love your heart felt poem, with its beautiful images. Here is a piece I wrote a while ago: http://aplaceforpoetry.wordpress.com/2013/05/11/night/
Dementia is strange, can be sad, and is definitely demanding, but as creative people, I feel we have a lot to offer in terms of diffusing the anxiety which accompanies it and supporting people to explore and enjoy.
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Thank you Julia. I will pop over and check it out soon.
My father’s illness did not have much enjoyment for anyone I think. Some funny moments, yes, but many ugly, scary episodes. It’s funny but your comment shocked me a bit until I recalled a comment I had made about a piece I wrote on my mother’s death, and said much the same thing:
https://aprayerlikegravity.wordpress.com/2013/03/16/three-facets/
I’m not sure why, but I seem to be more comfortable with death than with memory loss. But that is why I write this “Missing” series.
Thank you for your words–
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“carry your stories deep into
the night and leave them like luggage
on a railway platform”
I love this line. It reminds me of a repetitive dream of being lost in a railway station, searching for the people I love. I get the same feeling from your poem as from the dream. Good one. Alice
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Yes, Alice. That is exactly how I imagine dementia to be–a repetitive dream of being lost. And perhaps the feeling that the people you love are turning into ghosts before your eyes. I am somehow fascinated by this thing that also horrifies me. Wondering what it was like for him. I have always felt there is something haunting about railway stations, especially empty. Glad to hear that feeling was conveyed.
Thank you!
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JCC, You nailed it with this one. You’re horror and fascination come through well. Alice
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A poem full of grace…very beautifully expressed Gravity.
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Thank you Light–you are gracious, indeed (and in deed!).
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