we sit in circles like dust settling out of the room like light fading into the corners like dark creeping along the floor we sit and are ourselves only to ourselves to all others we are other we stand like trees like blades of tall grass like birds on long legs in the water we fly at ourselves and whirl about our own heads we the moth we the flame we the candlemaker we hold ourselves like little children and laugh into our hair into the sun and become light
icarus themes… nice plg more than the icarus journey, the after struggles..
JIm
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Thank you for your words.
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😉
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I honestly had not thought of that motif, but it certainly fits.
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i used to feel like nothing really meant anything… now, i feel like everything means something. Im no symbology expert, but icarus is one that is hard for me to miss, when i see it.
all the best, jim
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Most excellent – that separation between private and public selves. I loved the whirling about our own heads and the moth/flame/candlemaker images.
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Thanks OoaC. I think that part of what we as poets do is flirt with that boundary–flit around and across it. Thank you for bringing that aspect of this (which I don’t think I had fully seen) to light.
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Lovely imagery – you’re a little cracker Mr Crabs 🙂
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Oh, I’m crackers all right…
Thanks Panda-Man.
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I love the entire last stanza here…the holding ourselves like little children is wonderful, what resonance for me… Thanks Johnny, be well~
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I have been thinking much lately of the children we all hold within our selves and this thought is finding its way into many of my pieces.
Thank you, and i am glad you could connect.
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i’ve never seen someone describing seperateness/individuality so adequate while using the word ‘we’. brilliant.
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Thank you so much for this! There is a quote (one of those that WP puts up on the screen when you publish a post) about not knowing what you have to say until you write it. I have often found that I don’t always know what I am saying exactly until someone reads what I’ve written, until the words bounce back. I think you have summed this up better than I could have.
Thank you.
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My pleasure… I know that feeling, too…
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