...of gogyohka in my pocket better than finding half-chewed gum ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i awoke in the night thinking of words and a particular quatrain and somehow feeling that it needed icing the only wave that I can catch is the one that is nothing but my phenomenal self i find a different face at every direction while i sit at the center smearing into pink be your own nothing your own emptiness find the comforting womb of void where you were born i walk the line between real effort and over-wrought irreality between profound honesty and whoring profundity ...puttin' the Po' in NaPoWriMo...
These are great! ….I could hear a little drum roll and cymbals after each one.
And I will now think of being Caucasian as “smearing to pink”
The last stanza is epic….
LikeLike
Thank you J.–These gogyohka do lend themselves to that “punchline” feel…
Thank you–
LikeLike
God, I love the whoring profundity.
LikeLike
Thanks Susan…i like words that work as nouns and adjectives that can be paired and then re-paired like that, turning the meaning around….all this turning…
LikeLike
Brilliant, JCC.
LikeLike
Although perhaps nothing could be more honest than out-and-out whoring ….
LikeLike
hmmmm. Love that word…whoring. Visceral.
LikeLike
…the visceral-est profession?
LikeLike
Yes! And underpaid, as all physical work is 😉
LikeLike
I am so with Susan 🙂
LikeLike
I am so thanking you Mums… 😉
LikeLike
So much wisdom here. Don’t you love the inspiration that wakes you in the night?
I was just thinking about how I used to be obsessed with surfing because I thought it made me cool and would make others love me. Your quatrain about catching the wave that is our phenomenal self reminded me of this. Thank you. {{{hugs}}} kozo
LikeLike
Funny story about that one–a friend of mine a while back called me “Johnny Tsunami” and it struck me (comically) how different my life would have been if that nick-name had stuck instead of “Johnny Crabcakes”….yeah, maaaan, I’d be totally chillin’ on the beach on Oahu of Fiji maaan….instead of schleppin’ food…
😉
LikeLike
Been there, done that. I’d much rather be right here, right now, delving into the meaning of things with your poetry. Surfing is great, but it tends to be surface level by definition. {{{hugs}}} Kozo
LikeLike