17 thoughts on “Offerings

  1. unfortunately, the first part reflects modern life quite well. and unfortunately, the second part shows what conscious people have to do to survive such a world.
    well done.


  2. Might not be pretty–in fact, it is gritty–but it is real. Strong poem. Not everything has to be pretty to be poetry–it just has to grab us. And this grabbed me. No, no, no–not anywhere inappropriate.


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