My reply for Ramblingmums Three Nuts and a Squirrel Challenge.... _____________________________________________________________ You have opened yourself like a book, taken that look and given it back in folds of soft loving, given me the shivered salt of your throat while the river comes and goes, comes and goes
JCC–this is beautiful. The whole piece sings–if this is smut it sure is classy smut, and these lines right here slay me with their beauty:
given me the shivered salt
of your throat
Enjoyed.
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You are too kind Susan–many, many thanks.
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As I commented on my page – I shall comment on yours I really liked – really and the line (as Susan has) given me the shivered salt. Such imaginations – tis truly a wonderful thing 🙂
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Thanks Much Mums!
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Welcome 🙂 x
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just… wow.
i think i read it about 10 times by now.
want to quote the whole poem – i love it. so beautiful!
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You honor me…thank you.
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This is dreamy.
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Thanks D–
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Rambly is so apologising if she was brazen or inconsiderate last night. Not my place and I am embarrassed this morning.
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I assure you Mumbles, If you were brazen, you burned beautifully, if you were inconsiderate, it wasn’t even considered. Happy NY.
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You are too kind – thank you. Happy NY to you to JC.
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