we were lost to the world and we lost our souls in the mud of that shed and we slipped in the mud and we made it our bed and we stayed there and I became aglet to your grommet and laced you in leather and the leather left marks on wrist and on chest and the scars I still bear that you left and you fit me like fingers in gloves and I fit you like feet in a favorite pair of old shoes and our love worn to a thinness that tore like wet tissue like the cotton shift that you barely wore and I lost track of where the scent of the speckles of mud on your face ended and the taste of your freckles began In response to whimsy-mimsy's challenge...
Oh my. That ending is fantastic!!! The rest is good, but … The taste of your freckles began, awesome.
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Thanks! And thanks for the prompt!
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LOL the prompt was all on you!
Tag – You’re it – your turn for a prompt now…
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I love being it!
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*blush*
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great poem! 🙂
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Thanks!
Funny that it started out as a bit of a joke, but I like it too.
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Love this.
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Thank you!
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Magical the freckles and also the 2nd & 3rd… ah hell loved all of it.
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